這篇文章是針對 2021 年 DSE 英語科的 Paper 2 Part B「電動車」寫作題目進行的深入分析。它提供了詳細的考評局官方報告分析，還對如何提高寫作技巧，包括語境意識、語言選擇、字數控制等方面給出了實用的建議和技巧。
最後，文章提供了一份達到 Level 4 的真跡範文和參考結構，以幫助考生更好地理解和準備這一主題。
Writing popularity of the questions:（當年大熱題目）
#1: Q2. SALES OF ELECTRIC VEHICLES (SOCIAL ISSUE) – 44%
#2: Q5. WHETHER SOCIAL MEDIA INFLUENCER ARE MORE TRUSTWORTHY THAN TRADITIONAL ADVERTISEMENTS (DEBATING) – 12%
#3: Q6. 21 DAY GRATITUDE CHALLENGE (POPULAR CULTURE) – 11%
💡有關電動⾞（Electric vehicles）銷量過低的討論。如何吸引更多⼈買電動⾞︖
Q2 是當年最多⼈選的⼤熱題⽬，有44%考⽣選了這題。
Most candidates can: 根據考評報告，考⽣基本需要：
✅ describe in detail the nature and benefits of electric cars
詳細地描述電動⾞的性質和好處
✅ provide reasons why their sales were relatively low
提供銷量低的原因
✅ provide relevant suggestions as to how electric car could become more popular and
提供普及電動車的建議
✅ provide a balance between reasons for low sales and suggestions for increasing them, with some integrating the two rather than addressing them in separate sections
取得平衡地將銷量低的原因和解決⽅案兩者結合，混為⼀談，⼀起討論，⽽不是分開討論。
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🌟奪星亮點🌟
Strong candidates can: 考評報告表⽰，優秀的考⽣都能：
*adapt their writing to suit the genre of a letter to the editor, making it accessible to a general audience 有強烈的語境意識︔
*show an ability to use a range of linguistic forms 運⽤⼤量修辭/寫作⼿法, including:
✅ different tenses and aspects
✅ passive and active forms
✅ use of appropriate adjectives (to describe the benefits of electric cars and how drivers might feel about them)
✅ greater grammatical accuracy
✅ more varied vocabulary
✅ more complex sentence structures
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Examiner Report Recommendations
評卷員關注點‼️
1. 語境意識！！留意你的AUDIENCES是誰？注意你寫作的TONE！
Candidates need to demonstrate:
“Writing ability by making their writing appropriate to the particular text type they are asked to write. Writing simple sentences accurately might be enough in some tasks but might be too limited for others requiring more linguistic flexibility.
DSE考試報告 @ HKEAA
It is a good idea for candidates to read different text types and to become familiar with what is appropriate for particular purposes and audiences.”
重點摘要：
- 需要根據題目要求撰寫適合的文章內容
- 具有適度廣泛的詞彙量，並使用一些專有名詞
- 句子結構要準確且適當
- 語境和風格要符合文體要求
- 有效地維持段落結構以實現整體連貫性
- 強調語境意識，寫作要適應特定的文體和觀眾
- 熟悉不同文體的語氣和用詞，並了解特定目的和觀眾所需的適當表達方式
- 寫作時適當運用創意和想像力
- 強調寫作的目的，並以問題形式引出主題
- 組織良好的開頭、主體和結尾段落
⼀再強調的奪🌟 技巧
熟悉各種⽂體的tone，再背萬能high frequency words是取勝之道！
2. 有關LANGUAGE CHOICE，⼀定要注意COHERENCE（連貫性）
- connecting ideas 不同⽂體的差別
- In persuasive or argumentative essays：explicitly（議論⽂要清楚明確，直接了當）
- In some text types (e.g. blog, letter)：too much logical development might actually detract from effective organisation（但有些⽂體反⽽不適合太多過於理性的表達）
3. 有關「爆字」，考評局特別提醒考⽣：
“PART B TASKS CAN BE COMPLETED IN AROUND 400 WORDS. LONGER RESPONSES WILL NOT NECESSARILY GAIN HIGHER MARKS SIMPLY BY VIRTUE OF LENGTH.
IF WRITING BEYOND THE WORD GUIDE, THE LENGTH SHOULD NOT IMPEDE THE COMMUNICATIVE EFFECTIVENESS.”
DSE考試報告 @ HKEAA
有關字數限制，根據考評局，Part B只需400字左右，⽂章夠長並不代表⼀定⾼分，字可以爆，但爆出的字不可以「妨礙有效溝通」，等於不要故意拖長句⼦ & repeating ideas（重覆論點）。
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🌟 級學⽣技巧：合理爆字！
歷年DSE英⽂作⽂拿到5、5*、5**的範⽂的確都有爆字︔
字數平均是題⽬要求的兩倍左右。
5**同學字數：
-Part A: 約350字
-Part B: 約800字
（*以下有關Q2電動⾞的DSE Level 4 真跡範⽂：700字左右*）
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總結
⾼分作品似乎都是需要「合理爆字」；
但記得不要以偏概全，過度詮釋為越多字越⾼分。
**⼀定要掌握寫作基本要求**
DSE 2021 Paper 2 Part B「電動車」寫作題目
【考評局官方報告分析】
DSE 英⽂科想攞到 Level3︖
Learn from at least **Level 4 範⽂的基本要求**
As mentioned, 以下有關電動⾞的DSE Level 4 真跡範⽂，字數為700字左右。
Content:
• relevant (fulfil the requirements of the question) 貼題的✅
• creativity and imagination are developed 有⼀定的創意和想像⼒✅
e.g. “may not be able to **keep abreast with（**跟上/了解最新情況）the details and benefits of electric cars like the *silent motor sound, the fast acceleration and comfortable seats etc.”（他們可能無法跟上電動汽⾞的細節和優點，比如無聲的⾺達、⾶快的加速和舒適的座椅等）
Language:
• sentence structures used accurately and appropriately 句⼦結構，使⽤得宜✅
• vocabulary is moderately wide with some good use of more specialized vocabulary 詞彙量適中，並有適量使⽤專有名詞✅
e.g. ‘limited battery capacity/ explosion’（有限電池容量/爆炸）
‘accurate navigation’（精確導航）
• tone and style are appropriate for the text type（語境意識 correct ✅ ）
Organization:
• paragraphing is effectively maintained to achieve overall coherence
有效的分段結構，保持連貫性✅
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【範⽂｜參考結構】
-INTRODUCTION-
Para. 1 *state purpose of writing 表⽰來信⽬的
—> to express opinion regarding the low sales of electric cars
*and why is it a problem? 以反問帶出問題
-BODY-
Para. 2 *REASON 1
Para. 3 *REASON 2
Para. 4 *【過渡段】
Summing up REASON 1+2
& Introducing SUGGESTION 1 + 2
Para. 5 *SUGGESTION 1
Para. 6 *SUGGESTION 2
-CONCLUSION-
Para. 7 *重申問題 —> REASONS —> SUGGESTIONS
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